Been staring at this for a while now and sort of losing perspective on it.
Does it work? I like the main idea but wondering if the copy could be better. Is it telling the right story?
Should it be more prose than bullet point?
Happy to hear ideas but what ever they are they need to be no longer than the characters in that block. So 427 characters.
Great work on this and great work on your previous ones.
One challenge with this one I see is that when you translate it into French, it may need someone who knows French to make sure the translation is good. We are obviously aware of the expression ball and chain, but sometimes expressions or figures of speech do not translate well when put through google translate etc.
Thanks for all the work you have been putting in.